Virtue of Steel #4 - carving a path to the hold

Much introspection and fighting - which is what these guys do best

I am not sure about action scenes. It seems I write reams and reams to cover 10 seconds of action and I keep prodding and editing and going back.,

Of course, swapping between the 1st person and 3rd person wasn't helpful either.

That's it Asharra's not alowed to fight Gargoyles anymore. They're too much damn effort. She can take up flower arranging instead.


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