very nice - really got the feeling of the three youngsters not entirely happy to be sharing and snarking at each other round robin, and Grandmother Priss certainly seems a character. The transition between meeting Rhiannon and then meeting Liam isn't your best, but the story as a whole rocks, and gives a nice insite into their messed up family life.
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Date: 2004-07-04 01:07 pm (UTC)