Words cannot describe how much this THING killed me. I hate hate hate it. I've re-written it 10 thousand times and I hate each version more than the last *kicks it*
But it's done and it's being posted so I don't have to look at it until I am drunk. So there :P
And to think, I used to like the fight scenes. It just seems... dry and boring and wordy which it really really shouldn't be. And there are too many adjectives. And it's too detached
Grrr, I need to re-write it
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But it's done and it's being posted so I don't have to look at it until I am drunk. So there :P
And to think, I used to like the fight scenes. It just seems... dry and boring and wordy which it really really shouldn't be. And there are too many adjectives. And it's too detached
Grrr, I need to re-write it
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