Actually, it seemed to get m,assively long, and there seemed to be an obvious break point. Also, I wanted to switch POVs (the main reason) and for the sake of confusion I think it's best to use seperate posts for seperate POVs.
I still hate the 1st person present tense. BUT:
1) I can't use the 3rd person for a same sex sex scene as I've complained about before. With heterosexuals you can get away with 'he' or 'she' but homosexuals need another pronoun, or you have to use full names and it just gets consfusing or long.
2) The past tense for a sex scene is not immediate enough. A memory doesn't have the same impact as an event unfolding.
( Spark in Darkness #49. The power builds. )
I still hate the 1st person present tense. BUT:
1) I can't use the 3rd person for a same sex sex scene as I've complained about before. With heterosexuals you can get away with 'he' or 'she' but homosexuals need another pronoun, or you have to use full names and it just gets consfusing or long.
2) The past tense for a sex scene is not immediate enough. A memory doesn't have the same impact as an event unfolding.
( Spark in Darkness #49. The power builds. )