You know what the MAIN problem is writing homo-erotic third person slash?
You can't use pro-nouns! The words "he" or "his" can mean any of 2(+) people! And if you can't just keep writing their names, and physical descriptions get old very fast. At least hetero slash you can use "he" and she" (unless there are lots of people playing of course).
*goes back to edit again*
You can't use pro-nouns! The words "he" or "his" can mean any of 2(+) people! And if you can't just keep writing their names, and physical descriptions get old very fast. At least hetero slash you can use "he" and she" (unless there are lots of people playing of course).
*goes back to edit again*