Hammered out at last

Bah. Not happy with this one, I may come back and severely edit later. I've become seriously unhappy with my writing style, too descriptive, too much waffle. I can almost feel the Monty Python crew in the background screaming "Get on with it!"

It was good in my head, but putting it on paper (figuratively speaking) required much hammering. It doesn't help that my muse is cheerfully throwing hard core sex scenes at me. Gah, be patient wretched muse! Will someone distract Erato long enough for me to attract Melpomene's attention?

::mutters and rants for hours on end::

( way too descriptive )