Predator's Predator #9 - Venturing forth.

I'm doing ti... i'm actually maintaining a story arc without being distracted! This must be a record... oh shiny thing *wanders off*



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Predator's Predator 10 - the rescue.

AAaaaaaaaand ACTION! Is it just me, or is combat tiring to write?

And difficult to write for that matter. How do you make action packed actiony stuff all fluid and actiony without making it seem all wordy and cluttered?

Maybe if I cut down on all the excessive adjectives I use. Not needed. Bad adjectives! No punctuation!



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